Dani ([identity profile] ellethill.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] neigedens 2009-11-12 08:52 am (UTC)

Oh, this was lovely! I especially liked the structure of the dream, its atmosphere and the disjointed POVs from McCoy and/or Spock. I think you've got the characters down pat, and what's more lovely is that you made the TOS pairing work for me, which is something very few writers manage to do for some reason, even if I do like the pairing.

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