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Where are the Snowdens of yesteryear? ([personal profile] neigedens) wrote2010-02-11 10:19 pm

a fic excerpt!

Oh man, so this made my day:






(You can't actually see any of his junk. Not that I checked. Or rechecked.)

Also, I am almost finished writing a Community fic that is going to be about 15,000 words long? I'M AS CONFUSED AS EVERYONE ELSE BY THIS. Anyway, have an excerpt? :D? It is about 200 words:

When Shirley went to the library later, Abed and Annie were still there. Before she could ask them if they wanted to have a late lunch with her, she saw that they were working on something together. At first she assumed it was more stem-changing boot verbs but before she could stop herself she had read the paper quickly upside down and seen this instead, in Abed's rather spidery handwriting:

REASONS FOR KIDNAPPING TROY:
1. Sexual favors
2. Terrorists
3. Organ harvesters.


"Troy still has both of his kidneys," said Abed when he noticed her reading it. "As far was we know," he added ominously.

Shirley looked at the list, then at the two of them, then back at the list. "This is a joke, right?"

They both stared at her.

"We'll see you around, Shirley," said Abed finally as he stood up. Annie followed suit. Shirley thought she maybe looked a little embarrassed, but also determined. Shirley decided to try appealing to her. "Annie, you two are being silly. Troy's not--"

"See you later, Shirley," said Annie rather sharply, following Abed out of the library. Thankfully, they had both left when Shirley broke down into laughter and ran to tell Jeff.
~


Look, I have really boring classes this semester. /o\

[identity profile] tl--dr.livejournal.com 2010-02-12 05:19 am (UTC)(link)
SO FUCKING EXCITED FOR THIS EXCERPTED FIC! lololol the set-up for this is just beautiful, the character voices are more spot-on than ever, and Shirley's reaction kills me. Can't wait for mooooooar! :D

[identity profile] neigedens.livejournal.com 2010-02-14 04:34 am (UTC)(link)
:DDDDD Thank you SO FUCKING MUCH for commenting on all of these. I can't even tell you how happy it's made me to read all of your comments. ♥

This fic is about this close to being done, so I'm really excited! It's been aaaages since I've written trufax longfic and finished it to boot, so I'm excited! I hope you like it. :D
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[identity profile] matchsticks-p.livejournal.com 2010-03-09 02:03 am (UTC)(link)
I found your journal through a google search for Troy/Abed fics and got really excited by the prospect of a Community longfic! Are you still working on this? Are you going to post it soon? Would you mind terribly if I friended you so I won't miss it when you do post it? :D?

[identity profile] neigedens.livejournal.com 2010-03-09 03:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, that's fine! :D I'm pretty close to posting it. I've finished writing, a friend's just beta-ing it right now, so hopefully it'll be up in a week or so.